Thursday, October 8, 2009

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There is this kid that goes to high school and his name is Allan he is in his last 2 years but got hald back so it was mostly his flat... Allan did not come to school many of the times. so he fall back in to many problems and was very hard for him to get all the work back in because he got so hald back in not coming to school. Allan didn't like to come to school because he didn't like the way he locket in his way of skating also all his friends are all ways talking about how hard it is to hang out with him wan he is not going to the skate park with them much. so Allan has a lot of things that are going through his mind about life and the way he is living it.
as he treys to live his life batter his life at home starts to turn in to hell. one day Allan goes to school but it is a 1/2 day and his friend named Chris and kyle wants to go to the skate park but Allan wants to go to all his class's but then wan kyle and Chris are about to leave for the skate park Allan then wants to come but they are already on the way out so Allan has to run out and cache them be for they leave. Chris gets mad at Allan because he is all ways doing this telling us something different at the last minute. but kyle and Chris wear already use to all of Allan's things so it was not that big of a deal. wan they want to the skate park Allan skated a lot more then he does bauecse there were not that many people there skating. but later he wanted to go home and kyle and Chris didn't and he didn't want to skate anymore because there a lo0t more skaters skating and coming and he felt on safe with his body. so Chris and kyle said OK and tuck Allan's back home kyle want to work and Chris want to do some home work latter that night Allan's dad comes home and his dad is in a very bad mood and he does not care about anything his dad and non start to fight Allan's See's that his dad just hit his mother so he comes and hits his dad in the face and his dad get knife and then his mom calls the cops the cops come get his dad and send him away Allan is very scared and does not now Wat to do with his life anymore so he call his friend kyle and Chris and they help him out and make him have a good weekend so he would for get about most of Wat happened.

1 comment:

  1. I think this story really goes into detail with the personal life of this student. It describes many challenges many teenagers face now days but is unique in its own way. Decisions will be the biggest thing to overcome. Over all I like the idea and how things are so far.

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